Corner
That's where the sound was coming from. But there was nothing there. There never had been. She'd always assumed she'd just imagined it. That, after being sent there so many times, boredom had caused her imagination to start hearing things. But in fact, it was her spending so much time in that corner, that drew them to that space.
Ok I want a re-write. But I'll do it down here ;)
But in fact it was her spending so much time there, that had drawn them to that space.
2 comments
Ooh, I like it! What an intriguing start to a story...
June 9, 2011 at 3:12 PM
Thank you :)
June 9, 2011 at 4:41 PM
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