Crush

It stopped. The ceilings, the walls, of countless floors above, reduced to a pile of chaos. Dust filled her nostrils and burned her eyes. She didn't dare try to move.

Through the beams she could see her friend. Motionless. "Can" - was all she got out before choking on the ash and debris that rushed into her opened mouth. She buried her face in her coat until her coughing subsided, then slowly shifted her weight, only the tiniest bit, to free up her left hand which was pinned above her head. She could feel the the stinging sensation of needles rushing through her arm as she tried to move it the slightest bit, but the tingling stopped at her wrist. The rest of her hand was firmly wedged. In what she couldn't tell, but it wasn't going to move. Not without bringing down the structure surrounding it.

2 comments

Oh no! And then what? I swear, sometimes you're such a tease with this whole time limit writing thing. ;)

June 30, 2011 at 2:35 AM
 

LOL! Thank you! :D That means a lot to me. Descriptive narrative is not my strong point.

June 30, 2011 at 7:52 AM
 

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